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Supervolcano - The Coming Doom

 
Dr. Quibble
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Supervolcano - The Coming Doom
The ground shall wobble like jelly and the rocks shall splinter,
And the sky will be dark and lightning shall be seen for miles around,
And the grey sun shall bring no heat and it shall be as winter,
And the living still roam amongst the graves they built underground.

The storm approaches,
The time has come,
We shall live as roaches,
Until its done...

The people of the earth look in awe as fire falls as rain,
And the screams spread as thunder as the people die,
And the life so new now extinguished in a blaze of pain,
And the mothers of the earth can only watch and cry.

Your time is short,
Your friends are dead,
Your body has contort,
You're struck in the head...

The panic sets in, the stores are empty, you have no choice,
And the fires of the world go dark, the air is thin,
And the people of the world scream until they have no voice,
And you struggle to muster that courage from within.

The air is as ash,
You have no breath,
You need not for cash,
But to stave off death...

I can add more verses if people wish, but a bit later on, lol.

(renamed)

Last Edited by Dr. Quibble on 01/22/2010 02:33 PM
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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bump
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Your pretty talented....sounds like something from the Nostradamus quantrines....<---don't know if I spelled that right or not. cool2
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Re: Supervolcano - The Coming Doom
Very eloquent. :)
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I find very inspired, well formed while still retaining poetic freedom. By all means if you are enthused add more.
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Re: Supervolcano - The Coming Doom
Don't forget Toba.

5.0 2010/01/22 06:46:16 3.045 93.756 20.9 OFF THE WEST COAST OF NORTHERN SUMATRA

[link to earthquake.usgs.gov]

Quite close to the mag.9.1 - 9.3 on December 26, 2004,

3.316°N 95.854°E
Dr. Quibble  (OP)

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Thanks all :)

Will add more a bit later on.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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bump tounge
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Re: Supervolcano - The Coming Doom
there once was a lass from Nantucket

who spied a large grey hot cloud and said 'FUCK IT'

she grabbed the nearest dude

who so excited near spewed

when she said 'GET EM OFF AND I'LL SUCK IT!'

boom boom lol
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An inspired vision of apocalyptic nature made manifest in the form of a poem.

You have a gift indeed.

By all means, let it flow.
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An inspired vision of apocalyptic nature made manifest in the form of a poem.

You have a gift indeed.

By all means, let it flow.
 Quoting: Angela


hf
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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bump renamed.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Who the hell keeps bumping this shit?

If people don't want to read it you shouldn't try to force them.
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Who the hell keeps bumping this shit?

If people don't want to read it you shouldn't try to force them.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 871475


I keep bumping it.

If people want to read this you shouldn't deny them that because you don't want to read it, no-one forced you to click here nor did anyone force you to bump it back up, but you did that anyway.

I expected this response from a lot of people (I have been on GLP for a while) And one AC will not deter me.

But i do ask of others, If you don't have any constructive critism.. Please leave and never return.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Re: Supervolcano - The Coming Doom
it's gonna happen.
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Who the hell keeps bumping this shit?

If people don't want to read it you shouldn't try to force them.


I keep bumping it.

If people want to read this you shouldn't deny them that because you don't want to read it, no-one forced you to click here nor did anyone force you to bump it back up, but you did that anyway.

I expected this response from a lot of people (I have been on GLP for a while) And one AC will not deter me.

But i do ask of others, If you don't have any constructive critism.. Please leave and never return.
 Quoting: Dr. Quibble



So you agree it's shit then. Excellent.
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So you agree it's shit then. Excellent.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 871475


Your entitled to your opinion.

As the creator of this I cannot judge it, I leave it up to others to do that.

The general trend so far has been a positive response.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Very cool poem, sounds almost like a blues song.

That part about living like roaches till the end, if you were making a song, I'd keep that as the chorus. It has a powerful message to it.


I gave you five stars and a bump. :)

bump
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bump yoda
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Hey your still kicking eh?

How is everything? You get your shoulder back in place?
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Hey your still kicking eh?

How is everything? You get your shoulder back in place?
 Quoting: Arctec


Yep, It's all good. Yep whoever told me to dangle my arm with a weight and twist my arm is a genius.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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bump yoda
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 871475


Lol, your bumping me now? rofl
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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=] bump
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You wrote more! Cheers!
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Yep, It's all good. Yep whoever told me to dangle my arm with a weight and twist my arm is a genius.
 Quoting: Dr. Quibble



I was going to tell you to tie a rope to your wrist and the other end to a good heavy door then slam the door. LOL Wasn't to sure how it would work out so I kept quiet. LOL

Last Edited by Final..Frontier on 01/22/2010 05:15 PM
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bump yoda


Lol, your bumping me now? rofl
 Quoting: Dr. Quibble

bump

What can I say...

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I was going to tell you to tie a rope to your wrist and the other end to a good heavy door then slam the door. LOL Wasn't to sure how it would work out so I kept quiet. LOL
 Quoting: Arctec


That's for teeth rofl

I'm almost 100% sure that would of done more damage then good

You wrote more! Cheers!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 802888



No problem lol.
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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What can I say...

[link to www.youtube.com]
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 871475



rofl

Last Edited by Dr. Quibble on 01/22/2010 06:01 PM
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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bump
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Been a while so... bump
Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.
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Been a while so... bump
 Quoting: Dr. Quibble

Dr., 1. To alter and make impure, as with the intention to deceive

Quibble, 1. To evade the truth or importance of an issue by raising trivial distinctions and objections.

Dr. Quibble
To alter and make impure the evasion of truth or importance of an issue with the intention to deceptively raise trivial distinctions and objections.

Not everything in this world is serious... some of it is a joke.

"Cursed with being wickedly british"
"Narcissist" - I wear it like a medal.
It is infact the sane that are weak with closed minds, only those outside the norm can see the truth.





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