A music track I wrote.....

Sounds good, cool ideas.

Needs mixing and a little production help but it's a good tune.

I would try to make it sound fuller, even though it's a sparse arrangement.

I would try to capitalize on that bass line, add some ambient synth pads or something to fill it out... maybe try a different reverb on the vocals.

Who’s doing the vocals?

It's a damn good song, just needs to be mixed. I saw your comment about it being recorded live to a cassette, so under that consideration, I think this is really good. The vocals are a little flat in some areas, but it's honestly nothing that couldn't be fixed with a few more takes/comps. It's solid if you get recorded and mixed professionally imo.