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Lance Roseman From BC
User ID: 77547432 Canada 03/25/2021 05:57 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | GLP at it's best attempt. 5 stars and a pine! If you are not busy weaving your own magick, you are trapped in anothers spell. “It’s time you realized that you have something in you more powerful and miraculous than the things that affect you and make you dance like a puppet.” – Marcus Aurelius |
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User ID: 77547432 Canada 03/25/2021 06:04 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I'm shocked, but not in a bad way. Thanks! There actually is a story that comes after the story in the op, but... Well, some stories are too recent to be read by their scars. You, just do your thing. All things come out when they need to! If you are not busy weaving your own magick, you are trapped in anothers spell. “It’s time you realized that you have something in you more powerful and miraculous than the things that affect you and make you dance like a puppet.” – Marcus Aurelius |
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User ID: 77547432 Canada 03/25/2021 06:08 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Moar! Thread: Tell Us a Story If you are not busy weaving your own magick, you are trapped in anothers spell. “It’s time you realized that you have something in you more powerful and miraculous than the things that affect you and make you dance like a puppet.” – Marcus Aurelius |
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Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 74398420 United States 03/25/2021 07:06 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | "All things are changing, nothing dies. The spirit wanders, now here, now there, and occupies whatever frame it pleases....for that which once existed is no more, and that which was not has come to be; and so the whole round of motion is gone through again"... Or, That which is dead may never die And with strange aeons Even death may die... Or... |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 74398420 United States 03/25/2021 07:07 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The immortal hand and eye That framed such fearful symmetry Predicted many fateful bonds Of atrophos' strings and Karma's song The last glint of Orpheus as his eyes Found lastly what his heart lost "And fade to black" says the fates "For the noble is tragic And the world ends in dark..." That immortal hand and eye The artist of many bloodless scars Has turned upon the dancing light Casting shadows through the mazelike masterful fingers Resting at the heart of the palm That master has framed thine predators Fang and hunted my sparrowlike dart Trapeze twig evasions crack easily Under the tiger's fatal stomp But the one death he did not create Was imagined in the shadow Of the start |
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User ID: 77682635 United States 03/25/2021 07:23 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Sorry, but your words are a bit too cryptic for my taste. They are your words aren't they? Last Edited by scimitar on 03/25/2021 07:23 AM Ominous regressions One Truth... many realities |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 74398420 United States 03/25/2021 07:24 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | That the tragedy of this story is a parody of its pretense That the beginning starts at the first verse And ends in the last breath That the tragedy is a totality Bears mentioning at the first Or last Or annotated dash Where footnotes cannot fit What if that was something the scars could say? Could they or would they make the skin join again but retain The mysteries that only parting brings? The turmoil of a name self forgotten and self begotten Ends in tears and returns in triumph But returns only to amnesiac dancing Languages new Choreography archaic Like a reader beckoning in the scene Of which he knows the end Unseen to the actor Whose scene loops Again and again We fail to save these little selves These old deaths and little scars These self taught macabre arts The pass codes of their arks Celestial sentences short circuiting Illumination is the absolute zero Of doomed time And doomed planes In the sacred secret tombs "The whales mouth is the way out", Said my oldest scar But the flood covered her up again |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 74398420 United States 03/25/2021 07:26 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Sorry, but your words are a bit too cryptic for my taste. They are your words aren't they? Quoting: scimitar Yes they are indeed mine. And I'm sorry, but I think while I often try to be clear as I can in the things I say, some ideas can't be grasped through reason. They have be seen by some inner sun before they can even begin to have meaning. And we'll, maybe they won't. But that is how those hollow gaps are served in the aeons between words that still wish to speak. |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 09:38 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | you might say that what I have learned over the years is nothing I'm sure many would say that but I would even expand on that I would say I've learned about the sum of all nothings a constellations of nothings which was a hard weapon won. haha. when you unmake the whole universe to meet your maker all that remains is all that you are basically, a razor blade lattice of narratives in a world that is false is truth so long as life clings to its scars... |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 09:46 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | but if we decide to let go of the stiches of past selves and old complexes and defective deficits that deride our bones and make us slaves now what we are to what history may never solve if we decide to become what we are trade the scars for stars who knows? but I get the feeling the story sells because blood compels... with a spark that would be better elsewhere sought... oh well. |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 10:03 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | or enact I mean ultimately, what free will means is that it is something you become something self determined the heroes journey is the river upon which you meet the face of yourself whether free will is free is actually for YOU to decide whether you will use the gravity of your eye to bring statues to life in the theater inside of your endless effervescent dance you make the pen move dot the i's poke the periods that is you becoming the script in the ark of yourself yes, the world you fear and long for is the world that has been there all along so where do you belong? the judgement of every second is always right now but it begins again and again and remains that's the paradox of being and becoming it's the story you tell yourself |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 10:10 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | it means you will be saved or crucified or judged on whatever terminus which your innermost depths have longed in totality, you already know the value of which you've determined for the constructs 'yourself' 'them' 'us' and 'God' for it is not that which you believe it's that which you innerwardmost wish to the utmost wish so strongly that you could never speak it because your lips would evaporate under the weight of so much honesty that is the only part, ultimately, that counts it is conspired of by the truest parts of you and some individuals are harmonious with it others are tortured at the picasso confrontations of the only eternal war which is not good versus evil but heart versus head feel versus are |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 10:32 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | there is no context in which this world can cease revealing to ourselves the patterns of our own souls there is nothing you can see or say or think that will not reveal you to thine greater I [imgur] [link to imgur.com (secure)] the truth is that the truth does and lies talk... |
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User ID: 79911591 United States 03/25/2021 11:11 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Am I understanding correctly that is is a an immortal being who just dreams different lives and wakes up to her end of universe like reality and reflects upom how fucked it is before the inevitable sleep which would dream of another lifetime away from the end of it all offering up small periods of wa Escape? It's a bit overly cryptic so Idk Last Edited by HolloH on 03/25/2021 11:11 AM .•°•.•° My Karma Fans °•.•°•. 1/20/2022 Retard 1/2/2022 Sick piece of shit! 1/2/2022 Defending pedos 1/2/2022 Pedo alert this dude supports maps...baby rapers 12/11/2021 You really are a dumb cunt 12/3/2021 "This is stupid, this has nothing to do wth pedophilia." |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 68072829 United States 03/25/2021 11:29 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Am I understanding correctly that is is a an immortal being who just dreams different lives and wakes up to her end of universe like reality and reflects upom how fucked it is before the inevitable sleep which would dream of another lifetime away from the end of it all offering up small periods of wa Quoting: HolloH Escape? It's a bit overly cryptic so Idk the character of the story I wrote is engaged in the transitory act that is quite common to all sentience because time is the reaper and hope is our attitude towards miracles they don't occur in this story and we wish often we could go back in time but it doesn't happen it doesn't ever happen that's the place where the end of time originates that's the tragedy of all transient tales and of course of their nobility as framed by the greatest of poets and playwrights we crucify ourselves upon our regrets and the succor of nostalgia even in the saga of our aeons successions sometimes the rise and fall of our gods but my character is actually the fool of this story. which is framed quite poignantly but with all the wrong pretenses. I don't expect that to be obvious because I didn't know that when I wrote it it would highlight what I don't truly believe there is another part I guess too cryptic, but concerns all beings that are yet to be immortal. yet to be... and that, the secret there is that they long to define the terms of the stories in which they are engaged and they long to know all the precise forms which presumed to pattern them but they never asked about the images their minds made easily between all spoken questions and every night while asleep those immortal figures dreamed themselves but woke into the finality of an alarm clock the finality that the time will not ever go the other direction is one that attests to the odd transience of sanity that we swear to be the most obvious of all truths and also that is where death lives the reaper he has a bell not a scythe and he prances not creeps... we have one keystone to deciphering the narrative of pictoral linearity and selfhood but it is a constellation of potentials that we know not its architect is a greater force that we sometimes can see, hear, and feel but believing it would be the height of folly to anyone learned, it seems |