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(OP) Veneficus Vita User ID: 79660986 Australia 01/07/2021 09:10 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Here's two verses. Quoting: Ty_ The first is not finished and doesn't follow the rules I set for myself. The second DOES follow those rules and belongs right near the final work. Inside they peered, light there was done. Then send it they did - with a grin. "This soul is ours, easily won - Shades; know naught but sin." Seen they had not - this vessel of none Power, resting in. Mighty as were, they'd seen but fun! Not power, within: Of The Great Invisible One! Again his mighty roar was felt, Tearing through the night. No hint of all past ill's they'd dealt, Calling none to fight. Not pain, nor hate; he'd made it melt, Roaring now – delight! The new one flew from where he'd dwelt, Glory, shining bright! wow they are both spectacular i think you are ready to go off pattern and just let it flow see what happens and share if you are willing we will all learn Thanks. All of this stuff makes more sense when shown exactly what I'm referencing. That said, art is supposed to be that way a lot of the time, as well as, can speak to the soul if you will - opposed to stating facts in plain language. I'm quite open to any interpretation or opinion anyone might have. Praise is great, discussion is too, criticism or query more so! As for going 'off pattern' - well, the thing is, I originally wrote and have more written not adhering to the form and meter I set myself. I chose to because it felt right, considering the topic, to use a format that touched on the golden ratio. Additionally - it is far more challenging. I suppose someone could consider applying form and meter of my own design as some type of hubris... I haven't... possibly hubris in itself? Hmm. The stuff I've written that doesn't adhere to these rules does typically flow far easier - but flow is easy... flow inside a set of rules far less so! An analogy of our society perhaps :P That makes sense I still need to advance to more strict poetry... like it is a challenge cool I like that There once a man who found glp And it drew him into its tangled tree So he read many posts to see what stood out most and now for the first time he is free Haha, not bad :) Lucky he wasn't from Nantucket - you know what those guys end up doing ;P I'm gonna head to bed folks. Thanks for the chit chat, I might return to this thread if it survives :) <3 Coz reasons, probably. Elea tel'Taur GDMD |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 74256948 United States 01/07/2021 09:23 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948 Fuck you False prophet? You are declaring me as such because... why? Did I give a prophecy? Love you too :) What a douchebag, pathological answer Do you have a handbook for this shit? |
Dave User ID: 79868086 United States 01/07/2021 11:53 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Here it went from men treating girls like shit to one day girls had them all locked into a hypotic hive mind where they wont hold any conversations with you Quoting: I_am_who_I_am every single human has treated me like shit in person for a decade after I woke up or whatever kind of how they treat eminem in hollywood an outcast within their kind I am a female in the most female possessed place in the world (formally a haven from abusive men) that wont go on side females-rule-over-men in a fake venus fantasy When I was homeless one summer there was zero shelters for me to go to every single girl told me I had to just find a guy to take me home and have sex with him for a place to stay the jezebel sprirt has been here forever and I have wanted to join but when I try to do a threesome it feels wrong and I bail I never do anything out of obligation ever never had a problem with that one since the day I was born (except one boyfriend that "broke" me or whatever) |
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(OP) Veneficus Vita User ID: 79660986 Australia 01/07/2021 11:44 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Here it went from men treating girls like shit to one day girls had them all locked into a hypotic hive mind where they wont hold any conversations with you Quoting: I_am_who_I_am every single human has treated me like shit in person for a decade after I woke up or whatever kind of how they treat eminem in hollywood an outcast within their kind I am a female in the most female possessed place in the world (formally a haven from abusive men) that wont go on side females-rule-over-men in a fake venus fantasy When I was homeless one summer there was zero shelters for me to go to every single girl told me I had to just find a guy to take me home and have sex with him for a place to stay the jezebel sprirt has been here forever and I have wanted to join but when I try to do a threesome it feels wrong and I bail I never do anything out of obligation ever never had a problem with that one since the day I was born (except one boyfriend that "broke" me or whatever) ^ What Dave said. Coz reasons, probably. Elea tel'Taur GDMD |
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(OP) Veneficus Vita User ID: 79660986 Australia 01/07/2021 11:48 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948 Fuck you False prophet? You are declaring me as such because... why? Did I give a prophecy? Love you too :) What a douchebag, pathological answer Do you have a handbook for this shit? I do have a handbook for what I write. It's in my head and heart, unfinished. I'm still writing it with each word I scribble, type or speak. Coz reasons, probably. Elea tel'Taur GDMD |
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Bajoran lightship ~ guest User ID: 79819224 United States 01/08/2021 12:05 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked. because they realize ... we are all in this together.. ***All in my opinion of course*** |
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User ID: 41011373 United States 01/08/2021 12:09 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | oooo, you ever hear of the fool that tried to lead? Got riddled with holes ... decorated with shrapnel ... not much left in the end ... some say they are a bit ... slow Quoting: TheFool so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked. because they realize ... we are all in this together.. This isn't about leading, this is about choosing to hide in the shadows. Wrong post. |
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(OP) Veneficus Vita User ID: 79660986 Australia 01/08/2021 12:14 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | oooo, you ever hear of the fool that tried to lead? Got riddled with holes ... decorated with shrapnel ... not much left in the end ... some say they are a bit ... slow Quoting: TheFool so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked. because they realize ... we are all in this together.. None above, None below. Coz reasons, probably. Elea tel'Taur GDMD |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 83916048 United Kingdom 03/20/2023 02:56 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Why not, do the shadows stink? As a chaos godd(ess) of primordial darkness, I rather enjoy the “shadows” Quoting: Lover_Girl Hah, the shadows are all well and good until they fuck over the light. I've spent my time in darkness, I know of chaos, I choose now to stand for light. I can utilize chaotic energies to do so, and will. I do however advise others to NOT do that, the challenge is great if one is to not fall deep in to the darkness. All my opinion of course. Perhaps I'm wrong. <3 Liar |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 84978195 United Kingdom 04/12/2023 02:46 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Why not, do the shadows stink? As a chaos godd(ess) of primordial darkness, I rather enjoy the “shadows” Quoting: Lover_Girl Hah, the shadows are all well and good until they fuck over the light. I've spent my time in darkness, I know of chaos, I choose now to stand for light. I can utilize chaotic energies to do so, and will. I do however advise others to NOT do that, the challenge is great if one is to not fall deep in to the darkness. All my opinion of course. Perhaps I'm wrong. <3 Do u fuck u 2 faced kunt! Psyop agent out to get those in light. Momota! |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 84978195 United Kingdom 04/12/2023 03:05 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Quoting: Anonymous Coward 79858351 Nope definitely not. I have enough proof he’s a 2 faced kunt psyop. Wen i maybe wrong im quiet and leave things but this kunt will for as long as I come across him will clearly call him out. When I’m right and I know I am I don’t stop. One thing I can’t stand is fake liars who use sex magic to lure and divide I know exactly what ur doing Ty and why. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 79858351 04/12/2023 03:13 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | it seems it doesn't occur to you that there is indeed a good dark ... you know ... like shadows from palm trees which envelopes you and is protecting you from the beautiful hot sun giving you room and breath to fully enjoy the stunning view of the turquoise sea and the green lush surrounding... ... of course I know that it just seems.. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 85607140 Ireland 04/12/2023 03:24 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | it seems it doesn't occur to you that there is indeed a good dark ... you know ... like shadows from palm trees which envelopes you and is protecting you from the beautiful hot sun giving you room and breath to fully enjoy the stunning view of the turquoise sea and the green lush surrounding... ... of course I know that it just seems.. very well said. |