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Don't hide in the shadows...

 
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Here's two verses.
The first is not finished and doesn't follow the rules I set for myself.
The second DOES follow those rules and belongs right near the final work.



Inside they peered, light there was done.
Then send it they did - with a grin.
"This soul is ours, easily won -
Shades; know naught but sin."
Seen they had not - this vessel of none
Power, resting in.
Mighty as were, they'd seen but fun!
Not power, within:
Of The Great Invisible One!




Again his mighty roar was felt,
Tearing through the night.
No hint of all past ill's they'd dealt,
Calling none to fight.
Not pain, nor hate; he'd made it melt,
Roaring now – delight!
The new one flew from where he'd dwelt,
Glory, shining bright!
 Quoting: Ty_


wow

they are both spectacular

i think you are ready to go off pattern

and just let it flow

see what happens

and share if you are willing

we will all learn
 Quoting: I_am_who_I_am


Thanks.
All of this stuff makes more sense when shown exactly what I'm referencing.
That said, art is supposed to be that way a lot of the time, as well as, can speak to the soul if you will - opposed to stating facts in plain language.

I'm quite open to any interpretation or opinion anyone might have. Praise is great, discussion is too, criticism or query more so!

As for going 'off pattern' - well, the thing is, I originally wrote and have more written not adhering to the form and meter I set myself. I chose to because it felt right, considering the topic, to use a format that touched on the golden ratio.
Additionally - it is far more challenging. I suppose someone could consider applying form and meter of my own design as some type of hubris... I haven't... possibly hubris in itself? Hmm.

The stuff I've written that doesn't adhere to these rules does typically flow far easier - but flow is easy... flow inside a set of rules far less so!
An analogy of our society perhaps :P
 Quoting: Ty_


That makes sense

I still need to advance to more strict poetry... like it is a challenge

cool I like that

There once a man who found glp
And it drew him into its tangled tree
So he read many posts
to see what stood out most
and now for the first time he is free
 Quoting: I_am_who_I_am


Haha, not bad :)
Lucky he wasn't from Nantucket - you know what those guys end up doing ;P

I'm gonna head to bed folks.

Thanks for the chit chat, I might return to this thread if it survives :)

<3
Coz reasons, probably.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948


no sir fuck you

and good luck to you
Ty_  (OP)
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948


False prophet?
You are declaring me as such because... why? Did I give a prophecy?

Love you too :)
Coz reasons, probably.
Elea tel'Taur
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
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no sir fuck you

and good luck to you
 Quoting: I_am_who_I_am


You are a lost sheep.

One day you'll find out EXACTLY who I am.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948


False prophet?
You are declaring me as such because... why? Did I give a prophecy?

Love you too :)
 Quoting: Ty_


What a douchebag, pathological answer

Do you have a handbook for this shit?
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Here it went from men treating girls like shit to one day girls had them all locked into a hypotic hive mind where they wont hold any conversations with you

every single human has treated me like shit in person for a decade

after I woke up or whatever

kind of how they treat eminem in hollywood

an outcast within their kind

I am a female in the most female possessed place in the world (formally a haven from abusive men) that wont go on side females-rule-over-men in a fake venus fantasy

When I was homeless one summer there was zero shelters for me to go to

every single girl told me I had to just find a guy to take me home and have sex with him for a place to stay

the jezebel sprirt has been here forever and I have wanted to join but when I try to do a threesome it feels wrong and I bail

I never do anything out of obligation ever

never had a problem with that one since the day I was born (except one boyfriend that "broke" me or whatever)
 Quoting: I_am_who_I_am


hf
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Here it went from men treating girls like shit to one day girls had them all locked into a hypotic hive mind where they wont hold any conversations with you

every single human has treated me like shit in person for a decade

after I woke up or whatever

kind of how they treat eminem in hollywood

an outcast within their kind

I am a female in the most female possessed place in the world (formally a haven from abusive men) that wont go on side females-rule-over-men in a fake venus fantasy

When I was homeless one summer there was zero shelters for me to go to

every single girl told me I had to just find a guy to take me home and have sex with him for a place to stay

the jezebel sprirt has been here forever and I have wanted to join but when I try to do a threesome it feels wrong and I bail

I never do anything out of obligation ever

never had a problem with that one since the day I was born (except one boyfriend that "broke" me or whatever)
 Quoting: I_am_who_I_am


hf
 Quoting: Dave 79868086


^ What Dave said.
Coz reasons, probably.
Elea tel'Taur
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Coz reasons, probably.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
OP, there's a long line of dweeb false prophets and you're just another schmuck in it.

Fuck you
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948


False prophet?
You are declaring me as such because... why? Did I give a prophecy?

Love you too :)
 Quoting: Ty_


What a douchebag, pathological answer

Do you have a handbook for this shit?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 74256948


I do have a handbook for what I write.
It's in my head and heart, unfinished.
I'm still writing it with each word I scribble, type or speak.
Coz reasons, probably.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
oooo, you ever hear of the fool that tried to lead? Got riddled with holes ... decorated with shrapnel ... not much left in the end ... some say they are a bit ... slow


so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side


so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked.

because they realize ... we are all in this together..





***All in my opinion of course***
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
oooo, you ever hear of the fool that tried to lead? Got riddled with holes ... decorated with shrapnel ... not much left in the end ... some say they are a bit ... slow


so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side


so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked.

because they realize ... we are all in this together..





 Quoting: TheFool


This isn't about leading, this is about choosing to hide in the shadows. Wrong post.
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Phagg3try glp investigating fight
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
oooo, you ever hear of the fool that tried to lead? Got riddled with holes ... decorated with shrapnel ... not much left in the end ... some say they are a bit ... slow


so maybe it is time for some hand in hand action. Some friends to step up and prepare to walk ... side by side


so then when their unique talents are needed, they will be able to warn of incoming danger as their view will no longer be blocked.

because they realize ... we are all in this together..





 Quoting: TheFool


None above,
None below.
Coz reasons, probably.
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Phagg3try glp investigating fight
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Hah, earned my badge of honour!
Coz reasons, probably.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
This isn't about leading, this is about choosing to hide in the shadows. Wrong post.
 Quoting: IfYouInsist


It's fine.
I'm happy to let the conversation flow.
Coz reasons, probably.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Tylyn?
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Shredder I think
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Why not, do the shadows stink? As a chaos godd(ess) of primordial darkness, I rather enjoy the “shadows”
 Quoting: Lover_Girl


Hah, the shadows are all well and good until they fuck over the light.

I've spent my time in darkness, I know of chaos, I choose now to stand for light.
I can utilize chaotic energies to do so, and will.
I do however advise others to NOT do that, the challenge is great if one is to not fall deep in to the darkness.

All my opinion of course.
Perhaps I'm wrong.

<3
 Quoting: Ty_


Liar
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
Why not, do the shadows stink? As a chaos godd(ess) of primordial darkness, I rather enjoy the “shadows”
 Quoting: Lover_Girl


Hah, the shadows are all well and good until they fuck over the light.

I've spent my time in darkness, I know of chaos, I choose now to stand for light.
I can utilize chaotic energies to do so, and will.
I do however advise others to NOT do that, the challenge is great if one is to not fall deep in to the darkness.

All my opinion of course.
Perhaps I'm wrong.

<3
 Quoting: Ty_


Do u fuck u 2 faced kunt! Psyop agent out to get those in light.

Momota!
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Done enough reading on ur bullshit ty u liar

Go take ur sex magic and stick it up ur arse. I know what u did and who u work for
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
hi
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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No it stinks of poopy 2faced liar
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
s'all good. group hug
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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No it stinks of poopy 2faced liar
 Quoting: Ayaya


really.. there might be something to it...

chuckle
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
s'all good. group hug
 Quoting: Piercing Darkness


Nah I don’t hug dark ppl.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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but it's so cozy in here..

chuckle
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No it stinks of poopy 2faced liar
 Quoting: Ayaya


really.. there might be something to it...

chuckle
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Nope definitely not. I have enough proof he’s a 2 faced kunt psyop.

Wen i maybe wrong im quiet and leave things but this kunt will for as long as I come across him will clearly call him out. When I’m right and I know I am I don’t stop.

One thing I can’t stand is fake liars who use sex magic to lure and divide

I know exactly what ur doing Ty and why.
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Re: Don't hide in the shadows...
s'all good. group hug
 Quoting: Piercing Darkness


Nah I don’t hug dark ppl.
 Quoting: Ayaya


it seems it doesn't occur to you that there is indeed a good dark ... you know ... like shadows from palm trees which envelopes you and is protecting you from the beautiful hot sun giving you room and breath to fully enjoy the stunning view of the turquoise sea and the green lush surrounding...

... of course I know that it just seems..

hf

chuckle
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s'all good. group hug
 Quoting: Piercing Darkness


Nah I don’t hug dark ppl.
 Quoting: Ayaya


it seems it doesn't occur to you that there is indeed a good dark ... you know ... like shadows from palm trees which envelopes you and is protecting you from the beautiful hot sun giving you room and breath to fully enjoy the stunning view of the turquoise sea and the green lush surrounding...

... of course I know that it just seems..

hf

chuckle
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 79858351


very well said. hf





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