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Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys

 
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07/27/2018 10:37 AM
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Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys
I pretty much just develop websites, maintain them and design business collateral where I work.
I love what I do, it just hasn't been scratching that creative itch lately, so I wanted to learn some new shit.

I wanted to make something from a not to distant dystopian future (cheesy, I know)
Here is what I wound up with.

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A few months after finishing and I see some things I would fix, but all-in-all, I don't think it was too bad for a first try at it.
Please, let me know what you think. Enlarge it and be a brutally honest as you think I need to hear - you wont hurt my feelings lol.

Last Edited by GTB on 07/27/2018 10:39 AM
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07/27/2018 10:43 AM
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Re: Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys
I really like it!

I was a bit confused at first, I thought the lead drone was pulling something... Then I realized it was firing a laser and side mounted guns.

Personally, I'd lose the laser? But I LOVE the Muzzle flash from the guns.

So there... a honest opinion.

I might share one or two of my works of "ART" later...

Let you tear them apart. You are definitely head and shoulders above my skill level.
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07/27/2018 10:45 AM

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Re: Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys
It's better than anything I could create.

The only two things that appear 'off' to me are the store sign language vs. the language on the sign (they differ), and the robot thingies--are they shooting at the man or are they shooting at the storefront?

I'm in my doctor's office so my next reply may be delayed...

Last Edited by Louis in Richmond on 07/27/2018 10:46 AM
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Re: Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys
I really like it!

I was a bit confused at first, I thought the lead drone was pulling something... Then I realized it was firing a laser and side mounted guns.

Personally, I'd lose the laser? But I LOVE the Muzzle flash from the guns.

So there... a honest opinion.

I might share one or two of my works of "ART" later...

Let you tear them apart. You are definitely head and shoulders above my skill level.
 Quoting: First Born Son


hf

Thanks for the honest critique. The laser is definitely the first thing I would change. I think I failed at making them interact with the atmosphere around it.

Would love to see some of your stuff as well!!!
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07/27/2018 10:48 AM
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Re: Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys
It's better than anything I could create.

The only two things that appear 'off' to me are the store sign language vs. the language on the sign (they differ), and the robot thingies--are they shooting at the man or are they shooting at the storefront?

I'm in my doctor's office so my next reply may be delayed...
 Quoting: Louis in Richmond


Many thanks, sir!

Yeah...continuity certainly was overlooked here lol. The drones are shooting at something behind the wall he is up against. I made the sign from scratch, the wall came from an image of a prison fence or something. I didn't get that perspective right.

Last Edited by GTB on 07/27/2018 12:06 PM
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