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Something I wrote...

 
Wrath O' Luna
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Something I wrote...
There once lived a man who I have come to know,
Who turned cold hearts warm and made love grow,
Who smiled at sinners and felt their pain,
And for us all this man was slain,
 But He rose, HE LIVES, the unconquerable Lion,
And I humbly await His reign in Zion.


Just thought it up while driving today. I am sure it is cheesy but oh well... God Bless you all.
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Wrath O' Luna  (OP)

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12/28/2014 02:26 AM
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Re: Something I wrote...
Hope this means something to somebody today

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12/28/2014 02:39 AM
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Re: Something I wrote...
God bless you! It is beautiful :)
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12/28/2014 03:31 AM
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Re: Something I wrote...
It does not seem cheesy to me.
Daughter out with my own way.
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Re: Something I wrote...
There once lived a man who I have come to know,
Who turned cold hearts warm and made love grow,
Who smiled at sinners and felt their pain,
And for us all this man was slain,
 But He rose, HE LIVES, the unconquerable Lion,
And I humbly await His reign in Zion.


Just thought it up while driving today. I am sure it is cheesy but oh well... God Bless you all.
 Quoting: Wrath O' Luna
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Re: Something I wrote...
It does not seem cheesy to me.
 Quoting: Daughter


nor I .
its beautiful luna.
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Re: Something I wrote...
God bless you! It is beautiful :)
 Quoting: ByFaithAlone


It does not seem cheesy to me.
 Quoting: Daughter


It does not seem cheesy to me.
 Quoting: Daughter


nor I .
its beautiful luna.
 Quoting: ZenZone 777


Thank yall for the encouragement

hf

Last Edited by Wrath O' Luna on 12/28/2014 09:49 AM
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Re: Something I wrote...
Very nice poetic ability there. :)





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